刚过去不久的511雅思考试,是不是都很想知道雅思写作的题目啊,小编来来满足你,为大家整理的2019年5月11日的雅思写作题目
刚过去不久的511雅思考试,是不是都很想知道雅思写作的题目啊,小编来来满足你,为大家整理的2019年5月11日的雅思写作题目。
Most of the world’s problems are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2019/5/11)。
对于此次作文,网络上有很多评书及解析,我转了一篇唐老鸭写作工作室的参考范文如下:
唐老鸭:本题近年来没有出现,对大家可能是一个陌生的考题,虽然这个话题大家其实并不陌生。
审题方面,本题似乎并不困难:*上多数问题都是由人口过多引起的,你是否同意这个观点? 我们首先可以论证人口过多的确引起了很多问题,然后从反方面论证人口过多引起的问题似乎也没有那么严重,人们的生活水平在逐步*,而且人类总能找到办法来解决人口增长过快的问题。
?老雅范文
The world has been experiencing a dramatic increase in population and this is causing many compelling environmental and social issues, but personally I am still optimistic about the human future.
词伙:
1. experience a dramatic increase 经历巨大的增长
2. compelling issues 急需解决的问题
3. to be optimistic about...对......感到乐观
A chain of most alarming problems on the planet are closely related to over-population.By definition, over-population is an undesirable condition where the number of human population exceeds the carrying capacity of the Earth. As human population keeps on enlarging, exhaustible natural resources, such as arable land, fresh water, fossil fuels, and wildness forests, would continue to drop sharply so much so the supply is not able to meet the demand. Also, as an impact of over-population, there would be an accumulation of human-generated greenhouse gases and carbon footprint in the atmosphere. At this point, the planet has continued to witness amplified global warming which could cause climate to change, and result in extreme hunger, drought, flooding, and habitat loss. Altogether, it is feared over-population might pose a serious threat to the quality of human life in the future.
词伙:
1. alarming problems 可怕的问题
2. by definition 根据定义
3. exceed 超过
4. exhaustible 可枯竭的
5. The supply is not able to meet the demand. 供不应求
6. footprint 足迹,印迹
7. pose a serious threat to... 对......构成严重威胁
However, the downside effects of over-population seems to have been exaggerated. To begin with, the quality of life has been considerably improved in nearly every sense over the past two centuries or more, and that has happened despite a rapid increase in the Earth’s population. What is more, in the most recent few decades, birthrates in much of the developed world as well as some developing countries are actually shrinking. A new scientific calculation suggests that the total world population is likely to plateau at about 13 billion by 2100, and actually decline thereafter. Of course, natural resources may be finite, but that does not really matter because time and again, human beings have come up with ways to overcome the limits of the planet’s carrying capacity.
词伙:
1. downside effects 不好的效果
2. considerably 极大地
3. calculation 计算;预算
4. plateau n. 高原;v. 稳定在某个较高的水平
5. time and again 一次又一次地
6. come up with... 想出,提出
In conclusion, there are reasons to be concerned about over-population, but there are also reasons to hope that the problem would not be so serious as some people might have expected.
猴哥解读:雅思写作只要不跑题,把关键词分析到了,加上较为符合逻辑的阐述就够了,我们去考雅思是硬应试的,不是想当作家的。再次重申,雅思写作无标准答案,有的是答案标准。通俗说,你说A是好的,你给我所说说看,A为何好?就这么简单的逻辑,别搞得太复杂。看的有群里在讨论本次考试的论点啥的,涉及人类和平,南北差距,恐怖主义,搞得是在写联合国大会发言稿了。
在看下审题,the world's problems 应理解为全球性问题更妥当,而不是我们面临的各种各种的问题,比如资源枯竭问题,而不是一个地方的大桥堵车之类的。可以简单论述全球问题的方面,重点论述出现的问题和人口过程的关系,记住是关系,就是评分标准的写作逻辑。但如果你去论述为何人口过剩就是跑题。
题外话:补充点相关知识点,下次用。
1.Overpopulation is caused by a number of factors such as reduced mortality rate, better medical facilities, depletion of precious resources.
2.the growth of population has boomed.
3.the growth of population has been on a constant increase.
4.Causes of Overpopulation are decline in the death Rate,better medical facilitities,technological Advancement in gertility treatment and so on.
5.Effects of Overpopulation are depletion of natural resources,degradation of environment,conflicts and wars,rise in unemployment ,etc.
5.Solutions to Overpopulation:Better EducationMaking; People Aware of Family Planning.
后对老鸭范文说点东西:此范文已经不错了,不过猴哥有不同意见,为冲刺8分的考生有个用。
The world has been experiencing a dramatic increase in population and this is causing many compelling environmental and social issues, but personally I am still optimistic about the human future.
分析:I am still optimistic about the human future. 为何谈到对人类未来乐观,不是人类面临什么大的问题了。
A chain of most alarming problems on the planet are closely related to over-population.By definition, over-population is an undesirable condition where the number of human population exceeds the carrying capacity of the Earth. 谈论问题与人口相关,接下来就是哪些问题及如何相关,突然冒出一句定义啥意思?As human population keeps on enlarging, exhaustible natural resources, such as arable land, fresh water, fossil fuels, and wildness forests, would continue to drop sharply so much so the supply is not able to meet the demand. keep on enlarging 感觉怪怪的,说不出来的感觉,就是别扭,是不是表达 expanding的概念?
Also, as an impact of over-population, there would be an accumulation of human-generated greenhouse gases and carbon footprint in the atmosphere. At this point, the planet has continued to witness amplified global warming which could cause climate to change, and result in extreme hunger, drought, flooding, and habitat loss. Altogether, it is feared over-population might pose a serious threat to the quality of human life in the future.
However, the downside effects of over-population seems to have been exaggerated. seems 是不是seem 单数复数?To begin with, the quality of life has been considerably improved in nearly every sense over the past two centuries or more, and that has happened despite a rapid increase in the Earth’s population. What is more, in the most recent few decades, birthrates in much of the developed world as well as some developing countries are actually shrinking. 出生率减少是不是decline 更好?
A new scientific calculation suggests that the total world population is likely to plateau at about 13 billion by 2100, and actually decline thereafter. a few 后面可数复数名词?Of course, natural resources may be finite, but that does not really matter because time and again, human beings have come up with ways to overcome the limits of the planet’s carrying capacity.感觉怪怪的,资源就是有限的,不是有可能有限,time and again 不就是always吗?
In conclusion, there are reasons to be concerned about over-population, but there are also reasons to hope that the problem would not be so serious as some people might have expected. HOPE在这里感觉不妥,后面的完成时态过度了。